When I'm Lonley
To anyone whose ever had hurt. To everyone out there whose ever felt pain....To all the lonley people who believe that there's no other way.....To people who are just like me....when I cant seem to find the door....I panic. When im thinking something crazy or remembering something bad. When i crack under pressure or if my eyes fill with water...when i miss someone I truly want to hold...When I remember the curves of their face. If I looked down at these sleeves that have wiped my eyes, or the unpleasant feeling of a runny nose. When I feel like one small dot in the ocean. When everyone has gone to bed.
feeling like Im lost in a crowd or just lost in empty space..When jesus just seems out of sight and I try my best to keep in touch with him. Wen darkness creeps in and u try to push against it....what Ive learned the hard way. ..never give up because in the end....It was all worth it.
1 comment:
heyy girlie. i love this stream of thoughts. beautifully archived.
consider title revision. to something like, "to everyone who's ever felt loneliness." instead of the '...' put a line break. it will look more structured too.
the only two lines i'd change up are 'the unpleasant feeling of a runny nose' - it just doesn't seem to fit, although it is severely unpleasant, and 'dot in the ocean' because it seems a little cliche. play with words a bit.
i love that the language is simple. it's pretty, but it doesn't try. thus, it is relatable.
and i feel you on the jesus line.
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